Urns







Some dreams are bubbles
Light airy ones float with ease
Few occupy urns

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Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea” , 2011

 

Urn

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About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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19 Responses to Urns

  1. Grace says:

    Lovely haiku…I like the idea of dreams being kept alive and floating ~

  2. critics says:

    beautiful …but why only lighter one float..let the heavier harder break free too :)

    here is mine
    http://thealchemycritics.blogspot.com/2011/11/urn.html

  3. Shauna says:

    oh yeah- get moving and do something.

  4. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Hmm, I don’t often disagree with fellow poets, but I’m wondering if the last line is true. Can’t even ashes dream? :)

    My Take on the Prompt

  5. Old Raven says:

    This is very clever. You know, somehow with a prompt especially for a Haiku … I feel constrained. But seeing the Haiku of others for this prompt is very freeing.

  6. Mike says:

    Great Haiku Becca.
    Life is for living your dreams.

  7. Nanka says:

    Well said becca and let not dreams be sealed in an urn!! Lovely picture!!
    I liked the idea of you having learnt a new word ~ ‘Kalash’ :) You really researched it well!!

  8. Pat Cegan says:

    Beautiful piece of Raku to go with your Haiku. Just super, BB. hugs, pat

  9. Write Girl says:

    Your haiku is so unique. Like your take on urn.

  10. Lovely, Becca, really lovely. I love the urn. It is raku. It is one of my
    favorite types of pottery. It fit your Haiku well. Your words are always
    perfect.
    Hugs,
    Izzy

  11. lolamouse says:

    So true. Don’t let your dreams die with you. Live them.

  12. Great take on this prompt, and an inspiring reminder to dream!

  13. Wow..what a clever take on urn…love it!

  14. A clever take. Enjoyed it.

  15. Nice haiku Becca. Great interpretation of the prompt “urn”

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