Some dreams are bubbles
Light airy ones float with ease
Few occupy urns
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Lovely haiku…I like the idea of dreams being kept alive and floating ~
wow, what an urn
beautiful …but why only lighter one float..let the heavier harder break free too
here is mine
http://thealchemycritics.blogspot.com/2011/11/urn.html
oh yeah- get moving and do something.
Hmm, I don’t often disagree with fellow poets, but I’m wondering if the last line is true. Can’t even ashes dream?
My Take on the Prompt
MMT – this urn is not carrying ashes of anyone – except if you consider the ashes of dreams not pursued!!!
This is very clever. You know, somehow with a prompt especially for a Haiku … I feel constrained. But seeing the Haiku of others for this prompt is very freeing.
Great Haiku Becca.
Life is for living your dreams.
Well said becca and let not dreams be sealed in an urn!! Lovely picture!!
You really researched it well!!
I liked the idea of you having learnt a new word ~ ‘Kalash’
Beautiful piece of Raku to go with your Haiku. Just super, BB. hugs, pat
Your haiku is so unique. Like your take on urn.
Thank you for your kind remark. I appreciate the visit.
Lovely, Becca, really lovely. I love the urn. It is raku. It is one of my
favorite types of pottery. It fit your Haiku well. Your words are always
perfect.
Hugs,
Izzy
Izzy – I love Raku as well. Beautiful colors!!
So true. Don’t let your dreams die with you. Live them.
Great take on this prompt, and an inspiring reminder to dream!
Wow..what a clever take on urn…love it!
A clever take. Enjoyed it.
Nice haiku Becca. Great interpretation of the prompt “urn”