Ancient one
Stranded unaided
Vanished spring
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September Heights
Day 3
Prompt:
Loneliness
(#162 )
Tackle It Tuesday
Prompt: Despair
powerful words and image.
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It could be very easy to slip into despair when one is old and alone….
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Oh, may a stranger come along and bring a little springtime bloom back into this benchsitter’s life with a moment of kindness and attention!
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Vanished spring? Wow.. I’m amazed by your writing becca..
Someone is Special
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Such a powerful haiku! You’ve wrapped a lot of sad and lonely into those few words.
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Powerful words! Powerful image!
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Wonderful haiku on ‘despair’ ~ (A Creative Harbor) on Blogger ^_^
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WoW ! Heart grabbing, soul grabbing.
Great post…and photo.
Peace,
Siggi
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Oh my goodness, this is sad. “vanished spring” indeed. Beautifully done, Becca
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The combination of words and image is just heartbreaking.
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Wow. This really speaks of the loneliness so many older people face. Very sad.
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Stranded? No not you Becca … I can see the progress in your haiku … this is wonderfully composed.
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How many people are there in the world like the one you describe?
Loneliness of Stars
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Yes – vanished spring. It fades so quickly and leaves many in winter sooner than expected.
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vanished spring! defines loneliness…Very beautiful haiku !
Lonely girl
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My spring is vanishing too, so your words resonate in my soul…
A Long Loneliness
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I like the image of vanished spring ~
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wow ! no one writes haikus like you 🙂
Thank you sooo much for finding me and reading my new blog ! WordPress giving so much troubles to me off late ..
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Quite a compliment ladynimue!! (blush blush) 😀
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Awesome !!!
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