Awaken Us Within

Posted on October 23, 2012 by


Void of light and love
Wages of sin distances
Corrupts souls of all

Connection on knees
Praying awakens within
Renewal with God
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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012




Prompt:
Praying

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Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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3 Responses to Awaken Us Within

  1. Green Speck says:
    October 24, 2012 at 9:06 am

    This one is beautiful !!!

    Reply
  2. Chevrefeuille says:
    October 23, 2012 at 7:46 pm

    Lovely set of haiku on praying Becca. Both are beautiful, my favorite however is the second haiku. I like the last sentence of that one ‘renewal with God.

    Reply
  3. leahJlynn says:
    October 23, 2012 at 7:20 pm

    Lovely and I love the line “renew with God”

    Reply

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