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a spectacular showing!
Night concert pitch jumps – that is by far the best line ever, EVER. VERRRRRRRRRRY nice.
Oh Becca, this is a beautiful blend of the two prompts. Wonderfully creative
Something in me still feels the glow of those sunset embers…
Slow Death by Guinness
Great imagery an photo…
I’m writing my haiku heights on my blogspot blog.
http://positivekismet.blogspot.com/2013/01/musings-trust.html
Eliz
Eliz
lovely, Becca!
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Lots of wonderful activities can be expected on night-fall. In fact it’s a duplicate of the day’s variety! Nicely becca!
Hank
Love it, and the sunset embers is a great image to paint.
I love this! Especially the 3rd line. Lovely!
I love the line ‘dying embers of sunset’,,,,,reading everyone’s work gives me new ways of looking at and thinking about many things…..
wonderful haiku, Becca … the image is there even without the photo.
oops! * “a special sound”! It’s late and I should be in bed!
Beautiful! Love the introuduction of s special sounf in the last line!
Lovely haiga Becca. I have read several other posts on ‘ember’ with the sun as theme in it … I wonder how is this possible? Different contributors from all over the world have so much in common that they write haiku with the same theme.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful haiku with us all here on Carpe Diem.
Nice take on prompt. Thanks for your earlier comments on my posts. ..