O Sweet October – TRM

Tan Renga Challenge Month (TRM)
at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

Opie Houston presents:


oh, sweet October …
spare thy frost on yonder grapes
our sweet summer wine

[ ... ] your stanza ??????

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oh, sweet October …
spare thy frost on yonder grapes
our sweet summer wine
spirits and tongues replenished
once snowflakes hath melted

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A Tan Renga is a short chained poem and is written by two poets. It looks very similar with the Tanka, the only difference is that Tan Renga is written by two poets and the Tanka by one poet. In this Tan Renga Challenge the goal is to write the second stanza (7-7) of the Tan Renga by associating on the image or the words painted in the haiku.
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My previous entries for Tan Renga Challenge

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013


LOGO - Carpe Diem Tan Renga Month Nov 2013
(by Opie Houston)

Tan Renga Month #26:
oh, sweet October …
spare thy frost on yonder grapes
our sweet summer wine

[ ... ] your stanza ??????

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Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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11 Responses to O Sweet October – TRM

  1. Sun says:

    satisfied and in a bliss state…can’t get much better. ☺

  2. This has the right hope in it… almost anticipating a spring after winter

  3. Steph says:

    spirits and tongues replenished… I like the sound of that.

  4. kaykuala says:

    Replenished and activities started to move in unison again! Nicely becca!

    Hank

  5. I have to admit that I’m glad I now live in a region where snowflakes no longer threaten my spirit or my tongue!

    Oh, Sweet October

  6. This is lovely, Becca. :-)

  7. jrbsays says:

    spirits and tongues replenished – I like the sound of that :)

  8. Great completion, Becca. Pawkiss for a Happy Day :)

  9. Andrea says:

    BEAUTFUL DAY…..
    SINCERELY ANDREA :))

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