Dark Velvety Sky

Dark velvety sky
Stars scintillate brilliance
Waltzing in moon beams

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© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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40 Responses to Dark Velvety Sky

  1. jennirey says:

    Love this…. Sheer mastermind..

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  2. feodoraslane says:

    Beautiful description and imagery..eliza keating

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  3. Like it! I can’t write very good haikus. I guess it takes practice.

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  4. ladynimue says:

    wonderful imagery :))

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  5. becca stunning haiku from you.. Thanks..

    Someone is Special

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  6. a nice string of wonderment, lovely!!! 🙂

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  7. dani says:

    i think your haiku is my favorite of today’s. beautiful!

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  8. trisha says:

    simply divine becca- its one of my favourite sights in this world and your haiku portrayed it for me in the middle of day.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/23/scintillate/

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  9. Sumit Sarkar says:

    What a beautiful scene…described by such beautiful words…
    Loved your haiku 🙂

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  10. Pat Cegan says:

    Ah, moon and stars, waltzing…..components of romance. Is there a romance starting in your life? Lovely poem, Becca. hugs, pat

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  11. There is something so sensual about velvet and moonbeams. It brings so many images to my mind. Lovely haiku

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  12. This prompt makes me stop and think of all the things in the universe that “scintillate.” I like it that you reminded me of the stars.

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  13. Jingle says:

    stunning imagery…

    lovely written,
    🙂

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  14. lolamouse says:

    I love the line “waltzing in moonbeams!” I like to think of the stars waltzing. Thanks for your comments on my blog too!

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  15. Mike Patrick says:

    Realy lovely, and I liked your stars better than mine.

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  16. The slow waltz of stars – lovely.

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  17. honeyhaiku says:

    Wonderful, adore your “waltz”!

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  18. meethimirchi says:

    very beautiful haiku .. well described the glory of night 🙂

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  19. Margaret Bednar says:

    Waltzing in moon beams. Lovely thought and image.

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