Riding rails for life
Box cars, hobo meals, loner
Gypsy spirit drifts
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It has been a fun month, SiS and “peers” – if I may be so bold to assume, myself a peer as well! 😉
In celebratory salute for completing my first Haiku marathon, so near the opening act of
“On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”:
For me:
Heel – toe steps forward
28 Nights pondering haiku
Freedom therapy
For you:
Timely steps forward
Pondering Haiku measures
Month of witty verse
Thank you – it has been a treat and an honor! ~becca~
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© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011
Hello Becca! Nice to be back in the Rally and see your name. Just mentioned you in an interview I did actually because your work on here has always amazed me and I tend to need more words for expression, you have the gift to use few words and say a lot!
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OMG — thank you for your visit … and I am honored by your remembrance of me and your generous feedback … 😀
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Greetings:
Hope all is well.
Noting that you have been part of poets rally in the year of 2011,
what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!
Come join our poetry rally today if you wish to mingle and get inspired!
A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Looking forward to seeing you share.
Respect and hugs.
xoxox
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U were simply amazing to read!!
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i love this. i’m usually interested in longer poems, but this was says much with not many words…
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It is a challenge for me … as I can be very wordy … it is a form of discipline for me! Thank you for visiting. ~becca
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The picture and words are very suggestive… I like it!
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Thank you for visiting my nook! 🙂
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welcome and have fun…
Happy Rally.
your Haiku is elegant.
😉
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Thank you!!!
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oh the spirit of the gypsy is not captured that easily 🙂 lovely haiku.. Happy Rally..!
Vinay @ I Rhyme Without Reason
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Thank you for your visit … can you ever capture a Gypsy’s spirit? 😉
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amazing Haiku, please share one piece with poets rally today, thanks.
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beautiful one, there is a bit of gypsy in almost all of us.
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I have always been fascinated by the “gypsy spirit!”
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Glad to see you have fun with Haiku challenge…
your words are stunning.
magical job.
🙂
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Thank you so much, jingle! It is a delight to see a comment from you! 😉
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Thank you 🙂
I enjoyed the one you wrote for yourself as this was undoubtedly therapy for me as well, kept my mind so empty of other worries, real nice 🙂
a sweet and nice exercise indeed
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It has been a refreshing, creative month ~~ may we continue with our therapy!
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amen !! Keep writing .. I love visiting your page 🙂
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Of course you are a peer! What a fun journey. I am so glad to have shared this with you and all the others. I will be checking in from time to time to see how you are and read your wonderful writing. Peace!
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Aww, thanks, Kristen … I will be doing the same. Namaste ~~ becca
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