Tightrope Walker




Journey’s road is narrow
Speaking truth slimmer
Tightrope walker sought


© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011

CloakedMonk’s MarchChallenge prompt – Circus

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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24 Responses to Tightrope Walker

  1. Loved the message, and the delivery. Wonderful, thanks!


  2. forgetmenot says:

    Oh, I do love Tightrope Walker–great haiku. Congratulations on your Poet Award–well deserved. And, I love the John Wooden quote–he did say some very truthful and powerful things. Mickie 🙂


  3. Pat Cegan says:

    Oh, Rebecca, you keep topping yourself. You really have a gift for saying so much in so few words. I love this! hugs, pat


  4. espriurenee says:

    I like your pieces. They are beautiful. Thank You!


  5. vivinfrance says:

    I read this as a situation vacant advertisement, and wondered what happened to the previous tightrope walker! A clever and subtle haiku.


  6. Mike Patrick says:

    “Journey’s road is narrow.” So accurate and such an understatement at the same time.


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  8. ladynimue says:

    Interesting take on the prompt !


  9. Smartly done, loved it….I used almost the similar kind of image 🙂


  10. Wonderful haiku. I love the last line.


  11. trisha says:

    very true becca. a golden truth applicable to present world.



  12. dani says:

    very clever!


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