Puppet on a String



State of confusion
Fearful indecisive self
Puppet on a string

Release these shackles
Freely escape to search and soar
Stage of clarity



© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011

Doubts, Fear, Inhibitions and Hesitations

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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33 Responses to Puppet on a String

  1. bendedspoon says:

    so wonderful Becca! Untangle! 🙂


  2. Very nice, I like it.


  3. seabell says:

    I need a bit of that clarity… I really enjoyed it!


  4. Amazing becca.. Loved it..

    Someone is Special


  5. trisha says:

    very beautifully said becca. thats better because i thought i have commented on this post earlier. i rarely forget the poems i have read before.

    esp a beautiful poem like yours.


  6. ladynimue says:

    Amazing lines and a deep thought behind them !!


    • Becca Givens says:

      thank you, nimue … it is a beacon of encouragement for those seeking, and is meant to provide an awakening ah-hah moment for those who need! it is always a pleasure when you visit!


  7. trisha says:

    just terrific! we sure can remove most of the strings if we try sincerely.


  8. Jingle says:

    freedom is priceless at times.

    love your take, smiles.


  9. This is excellent! The first could stand alone, but I really like the freeing of the second.
    Thanks for stopping by and leaving such a kind comment on mine. 🙂


  10. Amanda says:

    loved the last it is very powerful!


  11. Lovely pair of verses!


  12. It’s a wonderful piece of work and very insightful message.

    Thanks for visiting me. I highly appreciate your comments. 🙂


  13. Pat Cegan says:

    Interesting, Rebecca, much to think about. I see that you will probably have 5,000 hits by tomorrow. Congratulations! Your blog is a treasure house! hugs, pat


  14. I like the juxtaposition of these two verses. The first trapped, balancing on the edge. the second free.


  15. John says:

    This one is really nice ~becca, Clarity…vivid.


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