Floating Wishes

Rainbow hued bubbles
Iridescent, floating wishes
Soaring with trust


© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea” , 2011


About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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23 Responses to Floating Wishes

  1. Iris D says:

    I love blowing bubbles with my grandchild. There is something so uplifting and you have captured it in your brief poem. Blessings, Iris


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  4. Becca,
    thank you for the floating bubbles of child-like wonder this post evokes in my soul!


  5. Sweet Pea says:

    thanks for your comment


  6. What a beautiful description of the bubbles! I especially love the phrase..”soaring with trust!” I hope I can soar so well! Last week or so you stopped by my blog and left a wonderful comment. Since then I lost all my information in an upgrade and have had to reduplicate. I was wondering if you would stop by again and leave another comment. I really appreciated your kind words. If you can…go to http://shanaebranham.com/?p=29


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  8. Gary says:

    Fantastic imagery, delightful indeed!
    The words and image speaks to me like this:

    What is a bubble, if but to represent Trust?
    The membrane is delicate and easily Broken.
    To make one is easy, with small breath applied.
    Its Volume is warm, safe as it floats.
    But to Burst that Trust, it’s rarely the same again.
    Trying to build it once more, but the first Breath has gone….


  9. Jingle says:

    magical bubbles..

    love it.



  10. lolamouse says:

    love the last line! Beautiful.


  11. Soaring with trust.. wow… 🙂


  12. Madeleine says:

    Cute haiku and theme :O)


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