Consciousness
Within you
Be a light
Speak your truth
Constant Awareness
Vibrate
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This is my first attempt in writing in Hay(na)ku form.
“Hay(na)ku is a 3-line poem with one word in the first line, two words in the second, and three in the third.
Hay(na)ku is considered a modern poetry genre, first presented in June 2003. According to J Zimmerman, in a traditional Hay(na)ku, there are:
A tercet: 3 lines.
A total of 6 words: 1 in the first line, 2 in the second line, and 3 in the third line.
There is no restriction on syllables or stressed or rhymes.
Variations:
In the ‘reverse’ haynaku, the longest line is placed first and the shortest last. The total is still 6 words: 3 in the first line, 2 in the second line, and 1 in the third line.
Multiple hay(na)ku can be chained to form a longer poem.”
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© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011
"On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea" 
well put..
agree.
🙂
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😀 Thank you, Jingle!!
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Well done! Pretty difficult I should think.
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the form or speaking the truth? 🙂
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ha ! this was nice !!!
I liked these 🙂
And i adore this form too !!
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I like it too … a fun change! 🙂
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Wow, this is interesting.. Thanks for sharing this new poetry form.. It looks simple and definitely suitable for me to use in my poetweet (tweeting in poetry form) besides the usual Haiku and rhyming forms.. Thanks my friend.. I really love this.. *HUUUUGG*
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I think of it as a subset of Haiku! Counting words instead of syllables. 🙂
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Yeah, sound like it… Anyway, I tried it out and here is my first..
http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/04/collections-of-tings-poetry-tp25-it.html
Oh yes, by the way, are you twitter?
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Love it, Becca. Nice one!
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Thank you! I wasn’t sure if I would pull it off! Appreciate the positive feedback 🙂
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Hay(na)ku
New form
Oh what fun.
What if I
Don’t know
How?
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Souldipper, I read this earlier today while driving to visit my family … it made me smile! Your post is an example of how!!! 🙂
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