Poisonous demise
Wicked stepmother’s revenge
Luscious red apple
Snow White’s collapse
Alarmed the dwarfs and kingdom
Prince Charming’s lost love
Sweet kiss on her lips
Magic moment exchanged
Fairy tale ending
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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011
Prompt:
Poison
Wow! yes, this is how the fairy tale ends in this era.. the era of poison and where sin wins!
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😀 … and “they lived happily ever after!”
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This poem says it all… and very well, too! 🙂
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Thank you, Judith ~~ your visit is appreciated!
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You took off and flew with the prompt!
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Seems it just grew! Thank you for visiting nd commenting!
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lovely tale retold in a concise and charming manner. nice! 🙂
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I appreciate your comment and feedback as well as your visit!
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Lovely fairytale captured completely with your powerful haiku
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Ahh, thank you! 🙂
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Great little poem…love does conquer all!
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Yes, it does …
Thank you for visiting!!
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glad that the fairy tale ended beautifully. 🙂
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All my fairy tales do 🙂
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i love it!!!
i don’t know if you saw my post today about a text message conversation i had this morning ~ too funny! i know Snow White ~ i met her on twitter and she’s a dancer in Vegas now. {giggle}
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No, dani, I missed it – but I will go check it out asap!
This was a fun one … I started with a haynaku – then realized it was for Haiku Heights so I changed direction; then I could not contain my muse to only 17 syllables … feast or famine! LOL 😀
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The prompt was poison? You built a great poem on just one word!
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It started and grew!!! Thank you for visiting and leaving comment! 🙂
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