My mind wanders far
Across the desert to you
Veiled mystery
I should acknowledge – I do more “la-la-las” and “na-na-nas” than sing!
So mine is a ruminating melody ~~
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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea” , 2011
just adorable! loved it.
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I love mysteries becca.. here is my song, Somebody’s me
Someone is Special
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I like mysteries, well the good kind 🙂 Beautiful words as always, cute song 🙂
I should be doing lalas but instead I torture anyone with ears lol
Enjoy the potluck!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/05/28/gad-sa-w-fe-m/
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Ahh, thank you for your visit ~~
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Lovely haiku… I like the idea of veiled mystery.
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Me too! 😀 Thank you for visiting ~~
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Fantastic haiku!
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I appreciate your feedback … thank you for your visit!
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A lovely haiku and I love the exotic music too!
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I am glad you like it … appreciate you leaving a comment!
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very lovely, veiled and a mysterious write….it can take the reader on a journey of its own.
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The journey uses the imagination to reach the destination ~ Thank you for visiting! 😀
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I took this Positive Self Seminar once.. and one they I had to do (all were matched to their particular– feelings of short coming) was to dance like a Belly Dancer.. At first I was apprehensive, then I started to let the music flow and it felt liberating and I felt pretty and desirable (serious self esteem issues-:-) Love you Poem and the fresh memory of the good things I took from that seminar.
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I have thought about learning to Belly Dance … they say it is very freeing! As always, I appreciate your visit!
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I love Laureena Mckennitt, and your words captured her music in such a sublime way… Beautiful Becca…
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Thank you, Sam … I am glad you like it!
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A veiled mystery! How appropriate! Lovely imagery 🙂
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I appreciate your visit and comments! Thank you!
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Loved this haiku–love that it relates to the desert.Thanks for your nice comments at my place.
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Always a pleasure — thank you for visiting!!
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Very nicely done and the music an added bonus to give depth…even more so, to your piece. I love your Haikus. Between you and Trisha I have come to like writing them now and again. Thanks!
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The music was the inspiration … just waiting to surface! Thank you for the nice compliment ~~ I enjoy Trisha’s as well!! Your gift offers variety for us to enjoy!
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how divine,
cross the desert to you.
cool.
🙂
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😀
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I know that music very well–I have that CD by Loreena McKinnett. Your haiku goes with it perfectly, Becca! Wonderful. xoxo
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Ahhh, thank you, Gayle! Appreciate your visit!
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love the haiku! wonderfully expressed in those few words the depth of mystery & longing in it. and thanks for sharing the song. 🙂
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Thank you for visiting. Appreciate your comments and feedback.
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Haunting melody and haiku. I agree that it has such a middle Eastern feel to it.
Thank you for your kind comments on my blog, Becca.
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When I first studied Marco Polo in grade school, I was fascinated by his travels. I always wondered what it would have been like to follow his path. Thank you for visiting.
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powerful
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Thank you, Robin!!
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Hi Becca, lovely haiku and the music, sort of arab-like… A veile dance
🙂 The lalala’s and nanana’s btw can be beautiful too 🙂 like here. I dream away on your words…
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Ina – I am happy you visited and left a comment! I appreciate it!
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