On our day of love, I saw you there. You looked so sure and strong. You stood as if you did not have a care in the world. You showed me how to be one with you … all in the blink of an eye. How did you stand so still and not sigh out loud? When you saw me, your eyes spoke the words of love; your heart sighed with mine. Our tears were sweet and full of love. It showed we are here till the end of time. On our day of love, I saw you there for me.
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Form: “100 word – one syllable” challenge
© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011
"On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea" 
This is lovely, as we now expect your work to be! A gentle poet.
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What a compliment, Donna … I visualize you as one of the gentlest … thank you for visiting.
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Becca, this is so sweet, a true and beautiful conveyance of love. Cindy
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I appreciate your feedback, Cindy, thank you for visiting.
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I’m glad you gave this challenge a try, Becca. You did a wonderful job with a tribute to your love. Very sweet…
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Gayle – thank you for introducing me to the “form” and “challenge” … I appreciate your support and encouragement.
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ah love at first sight. what a wonderful dreamy and romantic piece!
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🙂 Thank you!
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There are always the eyes, aren’t they?
When it comes to love, all can be seen in them, the reflection of truth, I must say!
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They say, the eyes are the windows to the soul … hard to lie in the eyes … Appreciate your visit.
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love …that elusive dream that actualizes itself in our angst
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Thank you for stopping by and leaving your feedback … Appreciate your visit.
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Becca, where have you been hiding this …:-) such a beautiful romantic poem, it flows with ease and elegance.
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Ahh, Sam … it is nice to see a comment from you! Thank you for visiting.
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Lovely poem, happy story 🙂
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Thanks, Ina!
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Very fun. Made me smile. 🙂
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Glad it gave you one to take away with you ~~
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That was very nice. Thank you.
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Thank you!! 🙂
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Beautiful! Amazing what can be done with all single syllable words!! In fact I hadn’t even noticed it until I read on after. Well done!
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Thank you ~~ it is an interesting challenge!
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That is very challenging for sure. I don’t know if I can 🙂 Lovely piece, Becca.
My Rally Poem ~ A Poetic World
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Oooh, quite a compliment, Leo ~~ thank you! 😀
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This is absolutely beautiful Becca, warms my heart
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Ahhhhh, blush blush !!
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Love the lightness and carefree feel of this poem! You can feel the true love behind the words!
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ahh, thank you ~~ memory of our wedding day!
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Is it true that to be a poet one needs also to be a romantic? – I think it probably is, we need to see and speak reality differently in some way – lovely poem Becca!
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Paul – your visit is welcomed … thank you … I am not sure I am a romantic in my writing – but a glimpse may slip through occasionally. 🙂 Please visit again!
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Lovely poem becca 🙂
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Your visit is appreciated – thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment.
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May love lock your hearts
In an endless embrace
Not many are blessed
With such heavenly grace. 🙂
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Ooh, my first poetry comment – thank you, Nadira. Simply lovely! 🙂
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LOVELY POEM!
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Thank you! Delighted you stopped for a visit.
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Ah, sweet BB, you are a romantic, indeed. Lovely poem, lucky man to have you love him so. Hugs, pat
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xoxo 😀
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It just can’t be said any better than that. Lovely write, Becca!
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Happy you stopped for a visit … thank you! 🙂
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Beautiful poem. I love how it has no real structure to it, like love itself.
The Lonely Recluse.
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What a nice compliment … thank you, “Lonely Recluse”! Happy you stopped for a visit.
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Made me wish there was such romantic love.
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Jacqui – It is out there! I appreciate you stopping by and commenting. Thank you!
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lovely,
sweet and sticky, thanks for the tickle.
Happy Rally.
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I love the line ” your heart sighed with mine” …. so connected right there. This is outstanding.
Love it …
Namaste,
Isadora
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🙂
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wonderful feeling of appreciating love ..
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At times, it can be so easily taken for granted … ignorance on one’s part … need to maintain focus past the little things in life which block the view! Thank you, Chimnese for visiting.
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“your eyes spoke words of love”
that’s how you really know! beautiful! ♥
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Describes my husband on our wedding day. He was so proud looking ~~ 😉
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Many times..if it is right … love can be just like this! Simply wonderful!
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So true, Renee … love is a dear emotion!
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Wow! I can certainly feel that, Becca!
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Thank you, Amy … I appreciate your feedback. Many blessings ~~
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