You’re Nearer Still

I sense you in
the midst watching me …
You offer me proof
in a gentle whisper

Shimmering veil of energy
Seeing you in flowers …
You offer me hope
in the breeze’s caress

Spirits transcend physical forms
Realizing you’re nearer still …
Surrounded in your love
Eyes brimming with tears


Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011


About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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18 Responses to You’re Nearer Still

  1. Oh .. I love the line “Spirits transcended physical form” …. so very , very touching.
    Lovely, Becca

    Hugs, Izzy xoxo


  2. Angela Cohan says:

    Beautiful poem


  3. “Spirits transcend physical forms,” oh yes, it’s true. This is lovely writing, Becca, and your grasp of the Divine is lovely inspiration for poetry. I also appreciate that you don’t bonk people over the head with any particular belief system or path… a transcendent journey. Amy


    • becca givens says:

      Amy – I am on this journey of self-discovery … if anything I share is inspirational or beneficial to another – then it is “lagniappe” for everyone around … I often just pen what comes to me – through me … rather than compose on my own. Thank you for the feedback — it is most appreciated! 🙂


  4. Pat Cegan says:

    Yes, those we cherish remain connected to us in lovely ways. Very beautiful, BB. Hugs, pat


  5. Mickie Brown says:

    Becca, This is a wonderful poem. Such a lovely thought said in such a beautiful way. A joy to read. Mickie 🙂


  6. rajathecritic says:

    you offer me hope in the caressing breeze……..lovely and wonderful


  7. Beautiful poem directly from Above.
    Thank you Becca!


  8. Becca, another lovely poem. God and beloved folks past all emanate from this piece. Amy


  9. souldipper says:

    Tears can be our best confirmation of deep seated truth. Beautiful, Becca.


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