I sense you in
the midst watching me …
You offer me proof
in a gentle whisper
Shimmering veil of energy
Seeing you in flowers …
You offer me hope
in the breeze’s caress
Spirits transcend physical forms
Realizing you’re nearer still …
Surrounded in your love
Eyes brimming with tears
© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011
About becca givens
Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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Oh .. I love the line “Spirits transcended physical form” …. so very , very touching.
Hugs, Izzy xoxo
Izzy – “Spirits transcended physical form” … it is actually written about my dad! Thank you for your visits today. 🙂
I appreciate your kind words and visit.
“Spirits transcend physical forms,” oh yes, it’s true. This is lovely writing, Becca, and your grasp of the Divine is lovely inspiration for poetry. I also appreciate that you don’t bonk people over the head with any particular belief system or path… a transcendent journey. Amy
Amy – I am on this journey of self-discovery … if anything I share is inspirational or beneficial to another – then it is “lagniappe” for everyone around … I often just pen what comes to me – through me … rather than compose on my own. Thank you for the feedback — it is most appreciated! 🙂
Yes, those we cherish remain connected to us in lovely ways. Very beautiful, BB. Hugs, pat
Thank you ~~
Becca, This is a wonderful poem. Such a lovely thought said in such a beautiful way. A joy to read. Mickie 🙂
Appreciate your words of support and encouragement, Mickie!! 🙂
you offer me hope in the caressing breeze……..lovely and wonderful
I am happy it could provide some hope and inspiration. Thank you for visiting.
Beautiful poem directly from Above.
Thank you Becca!
xoxox Sara! 😉
Becca, another lovely poem. God and beloved folks past all emanate from this piece. Amy
Ahhh, thank you, Amy!! I appreciate the kind comment … when I work in the garden, I feel my dad is definitely overseeing me … among one of many times! 😉
Tears can be our best confirmation of deep seated truth. Beautiful, Becca.
Yes, they are, Amy … appreciate your supportive comments, feedback and visits.