A night full of bliss
Gardenia and tears mix
Her love walks away
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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea” , 2011
(repost)
Prompt:
“Love and its not being there”
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"On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea" 
you wake up my senses. lovely haiku 🙂
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Amazing piece!
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This touches me absolutely to the depths of who I am. It is beautiful.
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Thank you, Dana, for visiting. I am honored! Glad it spoke to you! 🙂
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a gorgeous poem that touched the deepest part of heart.
thanks for your loving wishes on my birthday.
lots of love.
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Trisha – it is always good to see you … happy you found something you like! 🙂
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This is beautiful, so sad
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I consider it heartbreaking!! 😦
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Oh, those sad “Good-byes” … the image is perfect … and the haiku …. beyond beautiful.
Gardenia so fragrant and sweet – tears so salty and woeful ….!!!!
Very nice, becca,
Izzy xoxoxox
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Thank you, Izzy!! Appreciate your kind words of support!
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They do that. Walking away seems so easy to some. The trick seems to be to expecting nothing or less.
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Ahhh, Sandy, as sad and heartbreaking as it is … I believe … it IS better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all!! I really do!!
Thank you for stopping by!
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awesome, love the imagery,
Thanks for sharing.
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🙂
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The lines and the picture go very well together.
Good use of a few words for a strong feeling
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Thanks, Jess — I appreciate it!
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Simply perfect. sad, true too often! hugs, pat
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I like it. Thanks for sharing.
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It’s amazing to see so much said in so few words. Excellent!
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My daughter would like this haiku . . . I love it! Thanks for sharing it, Becca.
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Sad. Evocative.
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Beautiful image and words to go with! Gardenias are one of those amazing flowers with a scent you never forget.
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Beautiful Haiku, right on prompt. Well done.
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Magnficent. No other words to say, absolute perfection. where do you get those lovely images to match?
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Ooo goodbye sex. ouch! awesome! 🙂
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Made me want to cry… xx
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Short and beautiful haiku, Becca! Empty beds in the mornings…
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Lovely! The first time I read it as if love walked away, the second time as if the lover walked away, both working very well!
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rejection always hurts, but it can be more intense if unexpected. one minute everything seems fine and the next….
a very poignant haiku, Becca ~ i especially love:
“Gardenia and tears mix”
a perfect response to the prompt! i love your poetry! ♥
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