Sweetness of your Lips

Kiss me once or thrice
Sweeping passionate moments
Sweetness of your lips


Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge
Day 6 Prompt:

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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20 Responses to Sweetness of your Lips

  1. Heaven says:

    More than thrice…sweet kisses indeed ~


  2. Leo says:

    Very sweet. 🙂 but why not twice?


  3. ladynimue says:

    too sweet 😉


  4. dsnake1 says:

    wow! very beautifully done, the haiku. 🙂


  5. Tilly Bud says:


    Nicely done 🙂


  6. Love the haiku…sweeping passionate moments…beautiful


  7. christine says:

    love this, especially the second line, very nice


  8. Laurie Kolp says:

    Love this, Becca… especially the first line. So sweet and uplifting!


  9. Alia S says:

    That is beautifully brief. Thank you sharing this !
    Please take a look at my blog and tell me what you think 🙂


  10. henfre says:

    Nice haiku! Thanks for sharing.

    Hmm… I see that thrice is indeed a word =)

    — Henfre


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