Whipping pirouettes
Rustling skirt, Graceful swan
Bowed poised for applaud

Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge
Day 27 Prompt:

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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18 Responses to Poised

  1. Grace says:

    such poise.. i do appreciate their bearing ~


  2. Graceful, delicate, feminine – a ballerina.


  3. dsnake1 says:

    elegant piece of writing!


  4. Love this…I love ballet and you have described it wonderfully in such few words…


  5. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    A dizzying set!

    Poised and poise


  6. Andy Sewina says:

    Wonderful words again!


  7. Wonderful sense of dancing spin in the rhythm of this haiku!


  8. souldipper says:

    I can almost hear the music! I wonder, Becca, if you are going to write about your Sedona trip. I would not be surprised if there were some spiritual gems in a trip like that.


  9. Nanka says:

    Beautiful twists and turns and jumps…lol sounds harsh for such a graceful dance form, where the dancer shows such great poise!! 🙂 You have chosen your words exquisitely!!


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