Singing with the Wind

Singing with the wind
Message to traveling storm
Thank you for your gifts

Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011

Thursday Poets’ Rally Week 52 
(October 6 -12, 2011)


Ta-dah!!! This is the last day of
Haiku Height’s month long Haiku challenge!!

The Height of Haiku Challenge
Day 30 Prompt:
Any topic


About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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40 Responses to Singing with the Wind

  1. Pingback: Smooth Sailing | "On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea"

  2. bendedspoon says:

    This is so lovely Becca — the Haiku perfectly described the photo. And you made me hum in praise — thank you! 🙂


  3. a gem piece. it sings itself.



  4. magher1 says:

    Positive and lovely! 😀


  5. Morning says:

    amazing haiku.



  6. This haiku is beautiful and gentle. I love that you used the name of the art work as your first line. The two works – poetry and visual art – give this post a feeling of unity. Nice package!



    • becca givens says:

      cj, I was very fortunate to find the art work after I wrote the Haiku … pleased the two meshed very well, and the art expressed what I envisioned. Thank you for visiting and leaving a comment ~~ I appreciate your time. Namaste ~~ becca

      cj, I tried to leave a comment under your entry – but for some reason it did not “register”! Fine work dealing with a ravaging disease!


  7. Nice Haiku Becca and the drawing is great.



  8. poetryroad says:

    Elegant is the word that comes to mind! Thanks for sharing and stopping by my place too!


  9. Old Raven says:

    Your Haiku are always written as you have long studied the masters.


    • becca givens says:

      Liz – you are far too generous … some flow easy, and some are like pulling hen’s teeth! This one results from my week in Sedona!! I must thank the area and its non-human inhabitants for the extra appreciation!!


  10. Ina says:

    🙂 Lovely, the thank you to the wind, and a lovely image too!


  11. Becca,
    This is one of my favorites you’ve written.


  12. Very nice, Becca, as always.
    Melodic ..
    Izzy xoxo


  13. rumpydog says:

    I love that! I can just sense the positivity those people send forth through their song.


  14. dsnake1 says:

    what a lovely haiku to end the challenge! breath-taking!


  15. ShonEjai says:

    Thanking the storm for its gifts…powerful!


  16. Singing in the wind when faced with the storm…and yet give thanksgiving…thanks for this positive message


  17. Renee Espriu says:

    Awesome image and beautiful words to go with! I really like how this simply melds together. Beautiful!


  18. kaykuala says:

    Gifts from the sky cannot be bought but accepted with awe! Great thoughts!



  19. Grace says:

    I like that message ..nice haiku ~


  20. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Gifts from a storm! Who would have thought such a thing possible? Only a poet! Thank you!

    This poet’s choice here and here


  21. Nanka says:

    Marvelous and well crafted!! The words have so much charm and beauty!! Love the image of the singing wind!!
    Becca, hope to see you at Haiku Heights the usual weekly prompt place on Saturday!! Ta-Dah is for a short while 🙂 see you soon!!


  22. Mike says:

    A lovely end to a great month of Haiku.


  23. meethimirchi says:

    Brilliant!!! could feel the essence pf joy


  24. Andy Sewina says:

    Singing with the wind is an amazing thought!

    Happy last day!


  25. Ramesh Sood says:

    I would rate it among the most beautiful entries of whole challenge.. lesson for life here.. I needed it so much.. GoThanks for all the support.. Best is yet to be! God bless!


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