Eying You Nearby

 





Eying you nearby
Covert operation stalls
Oh, where shall I hide?

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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011

 

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About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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14 Responses to Eying You Nearby

  1. booguloo says:

    Look at how we can be and how we are…move over you’re blocking my view.. smiles…

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  2. tigerbrite says:

    Full of mystery. Would love to know the secret of the mission. The picture echoes your lines.

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  3. Sheelonee says:

    fantastic visual firstly.Preraphaelitic,if i may say so.Secondly,i like how the words flow. 🙂

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  4. Mystery, longing, expectation….so much in so few syllables…great one!

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  5. Renee Espriu says:

    A little mystery here I would think!

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  6. zongrik says:

    sounds like stalking to me

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  7. Good one Becca. Loved it.

    Melanie

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  8. Grace says:

    a pity it was stalled….happy day ~

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  9. Amity says:

    Truly a covert idea Becca…:)

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  10. Wonderful haiku … with a mysterious impact. Love the picture.

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  11. Ramesh Sood says:

    Don’t hide… if it were covert ..no one will know..

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  12. Yes, great mystery and expectation in this one.

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  13. vivinfrance says:

    Mysterious – the essence of covert!

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