Muddled Thoughts

Quiet all around
Silence vibrates through the room
Muddled thoughts clearing

Image Credit

© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011

Thursday Poets’ Rally Week 58
(December 15-December 21, 2011)


About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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21 Responses to Muddled Thoughts

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  2. Erick Flores says:

    This reminds me of white noise. A very captivating poem!
    -Erick Flores


  3. Yes, silence can indeed vibrate! Good vibration, though, Becca.


  4. Renee says:

    This is a beautiful write, Becca! I feel it is the silence where my thoughts become clear.


  5. Heaven says:

    sometimes we need this silence to clear our thoughts..nice one ~


  6. Chimnese says:

    I believe that we need the calming silence of the thoughts that we have daily.
    This was a beautiful musing poem.


  7. Ah! Silence … a wonderful theme for a haiku. Love this one. Thank you for sharing.

    Ah! Silence
    wandering through the Night city
    a Nightingale’s song

    Happy Rally Becca!


  8. Andy says:

    Sometimes a bit of silence is all we need.
    Lovely. Nice imagery too.
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. I appreciate the heartfelt comment.

    For ref:
    Firebrand Of The Heart


  9. i adore a well penned Haiku and this is just that, well penned and thoughtful execution, nice work Becca! ♥
    Did I ever tell you how much I love your header? 🙂


  10. pure2core says:

    Woww! could feel this ..perfect absolutely perfect dear….


  11. poetryroad says:

    Ahhhh silence…the first thing on a mother’s christmas list!!
    This is beautiful! I like the picture you posted with it.
    Happy Holidays my friend!


  12. Perfect! I actually experienced this as I read it. (It’s very quiet this early in the morning!) Nice one, Becca!


  13. neha says:

    yes, sometimes silence does the trick of clearing our thoughts. Loved it 🙂


  14. Morning says:

    great one, love the last line.


  15. Wise musing, and the image is mystical.


  16. quiet is the best present on earth for me, I can’t get enough of it 🙂
    I love the pic as well! happy rally!


  17. Sometimes Becca there is nothing louder than silence.. 🙂


  18. Pat Cegan says:

    There is a healing and an knowing that comes in silence. Beautiful poem, BB. hugs, pat


  19. phylor says:

    beautiful as usual — sorry I haven’t been stopping by, or leaving comments! Your poetry always inspires me to try and learn haiku styling — I find it difficult and write in rhymes or free verse.
    Want to wish you all the best of the holiday season,. And hope that 2012 is a wonderful year for you!


  20. mairmusic says:

    send some of that my friend! peaceful verse.


  21. brian miller says:

    yeah i feel this…sometimes i just need silence to allow my mind to settle so i can move forward…


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