Hung the Sun and Moon


my love thinks
I
hung sun and moon

♥♥♥

of course, I won’t tell
my love any different
center stage is fun

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Written in Pi-Ku – 3 – 1 – 4  and Haiku 5 – 7 – 5 Structure

Image Credit

© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012




Day 6
Theme or Word: Think
Form: Haiku & Pi-Ku

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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19 Responses to Hung the Sun and Moon

  1. dani says:

    you are one smart lady!
    ♥ ♥ ♥

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  2. Aww.. Clever one Becca.. Loved it..

    Someone is Special

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  4. Brindle says:

    Your love is well defined here…:)
    loved the picture too…:)

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  5. Linda says:

    Yep! Center stage is just great in a relationship! Great Haiku and Pi-ku

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  6. Your love must love you endlessly! 🙂

    If Cacti Could Think

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  7. Renee says:

    Smart Lady, Becca! Love the words to go with this pic.

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  8. Andy Sewina says:

    Love the word picture you painted here!

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  9. sonsylass says:

    Clever and witty – this made me smile, Becca!

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  10. granbee says:

    Being thought to have hung the sun and moon for that special someone means we must be bringing a whole lot of light into their lives. Keep on stage; keep the floodlights full on, Becca!

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  11. I’m sure you will always remain center stage, Becca…no matter what! Lovely and charming piece. Innocent and sweet. Made me smile 🙂 thank you

    my latest
    http://kellieelmore.com/2012/02/06/pillow-talk/

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  12. Mickie Brown says:

    Very nice, Becca. Mickie 🙂

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  13. JazzBumpa says:

    Sun-blazed or moon-struck;
    In the dazzling glow, love is
    Blinded by the light

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  14. Lovely becca ♥ Beautifully done ♥

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  15. Amber says:

    Oh wow! This made me smile. It’s so nice. 🙂

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  16. Magical and mysterious these haiku and pi-ku. Love reading them. As always a great contribution to the world Becca. Thank you for sharing.

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  17. Whimsical!
    Goes Best with the Picture.

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