Yearning





Yearn for you
Across the miles
Hurry home

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This Haiku is written in 3 – 5 – 3 form.

© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012




Prompt 106
Desire

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About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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16 Responses to Yearning

  1. I like your using “yearn” instead of “desire.” Nice, light touch!

    A Desire Shattered

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  2. dani says:

    you express that yearning so succinctly and so beautifully, Becca!

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  3. Powerful. I can feel the yearning.

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  4. Paige says:

    Beautifully gathered.

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  5. granbee says:

    The illustration is ever-so-perfect YEARNING! Very accurate depiction of how our yearnings when love is far away!

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  6. Raivenne says:

    Beautiful. The succinctness of it making the words all the more poignant.

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  7. Vidya Sury says:

    Simple and poignant!

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  8. Karen says:

    Heartfelt. Lovely Becca.

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  9. Geraldine says:

    This is beautiful! Perfect for the prompt too. Happy Valentine’s Day. 🙂

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  10. Renee Espriu says:

    Sometimes waiting is difficult. The image of this lady speaks volumes.

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  11. brian miller says:

    ah felt this one…there was a season i had to work in another town…oh how i felt this…

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  12. Brief yet the message is so clear…awesome!

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  13. The wish of so many. Excellently done.

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  14. wightrabbit says:

    Beautiful, simple, so poignant. This is exactly what it feels like, awaiting the return of a loved one!

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