Yearn for you
Across the miles
Hurry home
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This Haiku is written in 3 – 5 – 3 form.
© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012
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I like your using “yearn” instead of “desire.” Nice, light touch!
A Desire Shattered
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you express that yearning so succinctly and so beautifully, Becca!
♥
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Powerful. I can feel the yearning.
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Beautifully gathered.
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The illustration is ever-so-perfect YEARNING! Very accurate depiction of how our yearnings when love is far away!
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Poignant ….
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Just lovely!
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Beautiful. The succinctness of it making the words all the more poignant.
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Simple and poignant!
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Heartfelt. Lovely Becca.
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This is beautiful! Perfect for the prompt too. Happy Valentine’s Day. 🙂
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Sometimes waiting is difficult. The image of this lady speaks volumes.
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ah felt this one…there was a season i had to work in another town…oh how i felt this…
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Brief yet the message is so clear…awesome!
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The wish of so many. Excellently done.
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Beautiful, simple, so poignant. This is exactly what it feels like, awaiting the return of a loved one!
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