Mirage

Posted on February 18, 2012 by becca givens






Desert mirage near
Illusion or reality
Crisp rain nourishes


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Prompt 107
Illusion

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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15 Responses to Mirage

  1. Suzy says:
    February 25, 2012 at 2:07 am

    a nice take on illusion.

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  2. ruchi jain says:
    February 22, 2012 at 1:59 am

    rain in desert, a really nice take..

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  3. granbee says:
    February 20, 2012 at 4:23 pm

    Incredible photo illustration and equally incredibly perfect haiku to tell this mirage story in 17 syllables.!

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  4. tigerbrite says:
    February 19, 2012 at 11:45 am

    I hope it isn’t a mirage, that desert looks really hot and could do with some crisp rain.

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  5. Amber says:
    February 19, 2012 at 9:41 am

    Nice one! 🙂

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  6. Anthony North says:
    February 19, 2012 at 3:55 am

    Excellent words for an intriguing pic.

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  7. kirti says:
    February 18, 2012 at 11:08 pm

    nothing like some rain in a scorching desert! and beautiful photo 🙂

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  8. MyWordsWhisper says:
    February 18, 2012 at 9:06 pm

    I really like ‘crisp rain’. Illusion or not, I can feel it and taste it. Very nice.

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  9. zongrik says:
    February 18, 2012 at 8:17 pm

    nothing like a nice crisp rain in the desert

    five illusions senryu

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  10. Grace says:
    February 18, 2012 at 3:43 pm

    I like the nourishing rain….beautiful picture too ~

    Happy day ~

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  12. Karen says:
    February 18, 2012 at 2:30 pm

    Rain, life giving, not an illusion!

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  13. souldipper says:
    February 18, 2012 at 12:42 pm

    Enjoying all the rain, Becca?

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  14. Chevrefeuille says:
    February 18, 2012 at 11:15 am

    Well done Becca. Love the imagery.

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