Gypsy of My Heart







Gypsy of my heart
Mysterious seductress
Temptation looming


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Photo by Enosh of: Enosh Bansode Photography

© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012




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About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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33 Responses to Gypsy of My Heart

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  2. Hema says:

    Beautiful…seductive haiku! 🙂

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  3. poetryroad says:

    You always amaze me. I have a question. Do you choose the photo first or after you right the words?

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    • becca givens says:

      In general – I choose the photo or image after I write … the only time I’ve used an image first is if it is part of a prompt — like this specific one. We were given the photo and requested to go from there. Thank you for your generous feedback, and stopping by for a visit.

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  4. Bob says:

    Yes this is indeed seductive, great impact with few words.

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  5. Jennifaye says:

    The poem itself–all 3 lines of it — seduces.

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  6. kez says:

    full of lustful promise …thank you for sharing x

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  7. Paul says:

    Becca – well crafted – erotic and wild in a great haiku – is there another word that says as much as Gypsy?

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  8. tempting becca… beautiful……..

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  9. tigerbrite says:

    Well done. Looks like the gypsy is about to perform the dance of the seven veils 🙂

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  10. Vidya Sury says:

    oh yes. there’s something very sensual about the picture and your haiku reflects it perfectly!

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  11. Renee Espriu says:

    Sometimes following your heart can be a good thing. Beautifully written.

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  12. lolamouse says:

    Lovely haiku! I hear the bells!

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  13. souldipper says:

    Aha, you wanton wench…we will be waiting in the wings!

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  14. Andy Sewina says:

    I can’t resist the temptation, to say GMT – this is a timely piece, Nicely!!

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  15. Nice, very sexy write. I am sure tempted,lol.

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  16. granbee says:

    wonderful photograph and wonderful gypsyheart of a haiku!

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  17. Asni says:

    Beautifully crafted. Love it, Becca!

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  18. Seductive ballerina with her little bells around her ankles. Maybe she tried to seduce the photographer 🙂 Nicely done Becca … you picked the right words to paint the image. Thank you for sharing.

    Namaste

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  19. “temptation looming” That could well have been so for the photographer. I like your interpretation very much.

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  20. Beautiful….you caught the image’s seduction well!

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  21. Valli says:

    Beautiful haiku Becca 🙂 !

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  22. Ramesh Sood says:

    Wow.. this is beautiful..

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  23. Grace says:

    That looks like a tempting seductress ~

    Very nice ~

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  24. simran kaur says:

    Amazing haiku ,becca 🙂
    Thank you so much for encouraging words on my work 🙂
    Love to hear from you always…

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  25. Beautifully done ♥ [ I have met a temptress like that ☺♥☺ ]

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