Through Clouds

Dream walking through clouds
Living life’s clear purpose
Jubilant passage


Image Credit

© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012

Day 24
Words: “Dream Walks”

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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29 Responses to Through Clouds

  1. dani says:

    stunning!!! ♥


  2. Valli says:

    This is lovely!…Lovely words and lovely image….totally very lovely!


  3. Jubilant passage…love that. great haiku


  4. viv blake says:

    Now that’s what I call a dream walk! Beautiful. We have been living in low cloud for days here – or fog if you prefer!


  5. Asni says:

    Ooh this is lovely, Becca! And the image is so perfect for the haiku.


  6. sonsy lass says:

    Something wonderful to aspire to, Becca!

    Thankyou for all the time and effort you’ve put into the challenge each year – you are always so generous in reading and responding to others – much appreciated 🙂


  7. So Enriching!!!
    I sometimes wonder how much we can learn in just few words and couple of lines.
    So much loved it, Becca!!!!
    Love always!


  8. dearrosie says:

    Hi Becca,
    I’m glad you came to my blog so I came back to say Hello. Your Haiku is fantastic. I’ve never written one, but I know it’s not easy to get so much in so few words. And the photo is brilliant.


    • Hi Dearrosie,
      I’m sorry that I just jumped into a conversation of yours and Becca but couldn’t resist replying you when I read that You have not written a Haiku ever. Actually I was just very much like you few weeks back and had a fear that I could never bring few words to a big 3D picture of visualization. It’s amazing you see…Becca writes beautiful prose and haiku as well which you can read from her blog archive and understand how all this works.
      Writing haiku is so satisfying…I suggest you to try ones some decent day you feel like. And do share you experience with us all. I will be so delighted to read from you 🙂
      Love & gracious Always!!!
      ~ Keep the Spark ALive..


  9. whimsygizmo says:

    What a gorgeous photo, and beautiful words.


  10. Awesome! Becca this is a nice one. That last line … very well done


  11. Vidya Sury says:

    Beautiful mental image! I like that you used “jubilant” – always gives me a feeling of celebration! Thank you, Becca! I am looking forward to reading your blog minus this “challenge”, too!


  12. zongrik says:

    yes, it looks like walking through that picture would be jubilant.


  13. I love this – every line. Thank you.


  14. Grace says:

    I like the last line..jubilant passage ~


  15. Connie Wayne says:

    Beautiful. You should share this with Sue Dreamwalker. She would love it. Blessings, Connie at A Hope for Today,


  16. Geraldine says:

    this is just wonderful! and in every way. 🙂


  17. granbee says:

    Wow–the illustration and your haiku have me skipping along and hopping over light beams right now!


  18. Just beautiful. One thing I like about flying is looking down on the clouds. (There’s not too much that’s enjoyable anymore in that form of travel!)


  19. This is not just a poem Becca, you’ve outdone yourself. This is a prayer. Love, Laurie F.


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