Deepest Stake

deepest stake
zest beyond reason
captured heart


Image Credit
© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012

Day 25
Form: Haiku Structure  3-5-3

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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17 Responses to Deepest Stake

  1. Pat Cegan says:

    Well done all around, Becca! You just keep getting better! hugs, pat


  2. special becca.. Loved it..


  3. Having one’s heart captured can be a good thing or a bad thing. It all depends…

    Virgin’s cult


  4. Vidya Sury says:

    Becca, I see a story here. That’s powerful haiku!


  5. This is very special – I like the line “captured heart” and the picture is perfect. Thank you.


  6. Excellent write, love the picture.


  7. Andy Sewina says:

    WoW! This is deep!

    Nice to ‘meet you’ Becca!


  8. sonsy lass says:

    Things ‘beyond reason’ are so hard to describe – well done, Becca !


  9. cloakedmonk says:

    You definitely captured the cult feeling! Very well done.


  10. That spiral downward image plus your haiku captures the greedy claims of all that is “cult”! It absorbs and rules till the mind and heart become a function without validity!


  11. granbee says:

    This photo to picture “the deepest” into the “captured heart” with “zest”–perfectly wonderful and extremely dense on concepts!


  12. Ramesh Sood says:

    Zest beyond reason….. captured me .. very well said BG..


  13. A beautiful image in word and vision ~ thank you for sharing becca ♥


  14. Grace says:

    Captured heart is perfect ~ Well played to the form and prompt ~


  15. Asni says:

    You’ve painted the picture for cult very well here. And in so few words! Awesome!


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