Precocious Journey

Life’s satchel jammed
Gifts, love, gratitude within
Precocious journey


This is the last prompt of the month-long Haiku Challenge held by SiS of Few Miles!

It has been a creative pleasure to bend, twist, stretch and at times allow or cause my muse to be raked over the proverbial coals!  To my fellow Haiku Challengers – I offer my appreciation and congratulations to you for jobs well done.  I have read exciting new poetry and met some lovely people this month.  Your diligence in daily sharing of different styles and perspectives has taught me interesting and enriching lessons; these I will take with me as I continue on my poetic journey.  Thanks to each of you and to SiS for another successful year.

Day is done, pens pause
Haiku challenge draws nigh
Fleeting muse on vacation!

Champagne raised high
Candles lit, bubbles billow
Tomorrow’s another day


© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012

Day 29
Theme: Journey

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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29 Responses to Precocious Journey

  1. dani says:

    LOVE your haiku, Becca! ♥ a FABulous month!


  2. Tarang says:

    Lovely set of haiku and nice words!


  3. becca givens says:

    Thank you to everyone who visited and left such generous feedback and kind remarks … it was a challenging but fun month! I hope we stay connected until the next one! Many blessings with the winds of March! 🙂


  4. Davide says:

    It has been a fun and challenging journey! I enjoyed connecting with all of the bloggers who participated. Great final haiku!


  5. granbee says:

    What a wonderfully overflowing satchel you carry,Becca! Love and gratitude will carry you far, to amazing places of deep refreshment.


  6. I’ve loved reading all your clever, thought provoking and heartfelt poetry – thank you!


  7. simran kaur says:

    Amazingly done, becca 🙂


  8. Eric Alagan says:

    Your verses and haikus are profound, elegant and enjoyable. Great talent here, I reckon. Peace, Eric 🙂


  9. Valli says:

    That was lovely haiku Becca. Thanks for sharing…I really enjoyed reading all your haiku in this haiku challenge…Thanks for sharing 🙂


  10. markwindham says:

    Excellent work. Thank you for all your kinds words this month.


  11. Geraldine says:

    sounds like a good time was had! Beautiful words here Becca. I love your name btw. 🙂


  12. Grace says:

    This is lovely Becca….Thank you for sharing your lovely haiku and journey with me.

    It has been challenging for me but in the end, I am blessed to have known all of you thru this challenge. See you ~


  13. I love this…we have been on an amazing haiku journey… I was going to try and pick a favorite one, but I love all of them. Great job!!


  14. wordcoaster says:

    It’s been a wonderful journey, and I’ll be sure to keep stopping by 🙂


  15. Someone is Special says:

    becca.. I’m deeply touched by your words.. I am speechless.. Thanks thanks thanks for being part of haiku challenge once again.. Pleasure to read you, as always.. SmileS..


  16. Becca … these are really nice to read. It was a pleasure to meet you during this Haiku Challenge. It was a journey with several ups and downs, but also with wonderful contributions to the Challenge by every participant.
    I will miss this every day writing of haiku, but … what shall I say … It’s my passion so I will continue to write haiku and maybe … some day some place we will meet again on a new journey.


  17. Vidya Sury says:

    “I feel happy-sad.
    to realize it’s feb end
    glad we connected!”

    It is a joy to know you, Becca, through your beautiful words.


  18. Such a Hopeful and cheerful Haiku!
    It was immense pleasure being with you on this journey,Becca.
    Thank you.
    Good wishes 🙂


  19. Brindle says:

    Loved it Ma’am….another masterpiece towards the end…:)


  20. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Not only is the journey of writing precocious, but it is also precious. Soldier on!

    Journey with My Muse


  21. Love your final words to us. Especially “fleeting muse on vacation” This brings a smile to my face as mine vacations often 🙂 It has been so good sharing this challenge with you.


  22. Asni says:

    What a lovely note to end on. Thank you for your encouragement and support and most of all for the company. It’s been an awesome journey!



  23. Andy Sewina says:

    WoW! Tomorrow’s another day!! Well said! Well challenged too!


  24. The word ‘satchel’ reminds me of a child on a journey of curiosity! perhaps that’s how it should be for all of us! Beautiful!


  25. cloakedmonk says:

    I love your final prompt! I celebrate with you. Have a glass of virtual champagne on me!


  26. Between Precocious Journey…That was just the right end to the precise haiku but a beginning of the new amalgamation of emotions, gifts, love, gratitude…Oh! I love it so much absolutely!!!


  27. Dear Becca,
    Absolutely a beautiful journey of poetry and creativity together.
    I learnt a lot for this whole avenue of Haiku & look forward to more of lovely reading through your blogs. Thank you so much for visiting my blog & leaving some wonderful comments which shall be always be remembered as an encouragement. However I could not respond promptly due to extensive travelling. I’m heartily apologetic for it. But just as the journey excels I shall follow thee!
    Love & Hugs
    ~Keep the Spark ALive..


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