Waves Wash Over Me





Waves wash over me
Healing waters ebb and flow
Clearing objections





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Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012


The April Heights

 3-5-3 or 5-7-5 Form

Day 5
Prompt 117

Waves

Celebrating April as Poetry Month!

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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29 Responses to Waves Wash Over Me

  1. Becca ~ magical and wonderful ~ awesome photo ^_^

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  2. Mr. Walker says:

    Lovely last line.

    Richard

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  3. Kendall says:

    A lovely visual. Thanks for sharing.

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  4. such a surprising ending!

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  5. Ramesh Sood says:

    How did I miss this, Becca.. this is lovely a haiku… beautiful….

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  6. Jeannette says:

    water cleanses and so it heals….i love your haiku!

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  7. tigerbrite says:

    Beautiful haiku. There is nothing like water to cleanse and prepare the way for healing.

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  8. very different interpretation..deep insight..loved the healing nature of the waves:)

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  9. PranitaBhat says:

    Very beautiful Haiku… this one! Has a soothing feel on reading it..! Absolutely love it…

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  10. PranitaBhat says:

    I absolutely adore this one… a very serene feeling comes out on readin it!

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  11. Beautiful and evocative. Thanks for sharing.

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  12. becca givens says:

    @ debu, hannah, Ruth, Geraldine, granbee, Karen, MMT, Izzy, Grace, Irene, siggi
    Thank you for each of your comments ~~ it is always interesting to read comments and interpretations!! I appreciate your visits and taking time to leave feedback.

    Many blessings to all ~~

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  13. Patti says:

    I like this a lot. It has that Japanese feel that a haiku should have. Lovely.

    I just noticed your “About” summary. What is an animal communicator?

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  14. nan says:

    this is a healing haiku! Worth imbibing!

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  15. siggiofmaine says:

    Deep and meaningful.
    Thank you,
    Peace
    Siggi of Downeast Maine

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  16. irene says:

    Such is the grace of water.

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  17. Grace says:

    I like the healing waters…very timely for this week

    My share: http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/04/waves.html

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  18. very beautiful, Becca ….

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  19. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    What? You have objections??? 🙂

    Waving Good-Bye

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  20. Karen says:

    Just the sound of waves soothes me.

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  21. granbee says:

    This is EXACTLY what happens when we are washed in the Blood of the Lamb! Love the illustration hinting to me both the cellular structure of blood and the entire world as viewed from far in space, perhaps. He died “for the sins of the whole world!”

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  22. Geraldine says:

    very soothing!

    Wishing You a Very Happy Easter Becca. 🙂

    http://www.myreallifereviews.com

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  23. Ruth says:

    ah yes, those objections – in retrospect I’m always glad for the ebb and flow… love the way you expressed yourself here

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  24. Mary says:

    Hi Becca, I am one you will find posting at We Write Poems as well, as I am participating in NaPoWriMo and am serious about it. Your haiku for today gave me a great sense of peace. Beautifully composed.

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  25. Such a soothing haiku!

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  26. debu says:

    waves of healing waters ….. while the wave appeared from the outside healing is from inside…

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