Waiting Their Turn






Flitting butterflies
Playing in water fountain
Birds waiting their turn




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Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012


The April Heights

 3-5-3 or 5-7-5 Form

Day 8
Prompt 120
Play

Celebrating April as Poetry Month!

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About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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29 Responses to Waiting Their Turn

  1. zongrik says:

    very very lovely

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  2. granbee says:

    Isn’t it truly a wondrous joy to watch butterfiles and birds flitting over the same shurbbery, trees, flowers, blooming grasses, and water sources. This happens all the time in spring in the spring-fed creek in my backyard!

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  3. Cynosure says:

    that was such a cute and creative haiku Becca…loved it…and also a beautiful image to support the words…great one… 🙂

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  4. Vikram Pyati says:

    Very nice.. *liked*

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  5. I like this, Becca. Quite imaginative!

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  6. tigerbrite says:

    Lovely haiku and picture giving a feeling of peace. Happy Easter to you.

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  7. Misky says:

    Your words create a lovely image in this. Well done. 🙂

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  8. Diana Teneva says:

    I like your Birds waiting their turn!
    Beautifully said!

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  9. Haha, nice birds 🙂

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  10. Tarang Sinha says:

    Lovely words and really beautiful picture!:)

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  11. I can’t get over how beautiful your haiku is next to that picture. Awesome!

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  12. Rallentanda says:

    Such well mannered birds…butterflies are very push these days:)

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  13. PranitaBhat says:

    Your post… very pleasant to read today! Left me with a happy feeling..!

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  14. I liked that taking turns concept…Beautifully penned Becca!

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  15. Haha….This is creative…..I like waiting for their turns to play with water…..Good one Becca!

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  16. glad that the pidgeons were not around to cause havoc, it’s the city girl in me!!! your image is lovely, Becca!

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  17. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    I LIKE this kind of play!!!

    The Christ Child at Play

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  18. Raven says:

    This has the beauty of the lightness of being within.

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  19. elleceef says:

    This is a lovely haiku and a beautiful picture. Thank you.

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  20. irene says:

    Delightful haiku!

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  21. Ruth says:

    oh! Becca, how beautiful!

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  22. A beautiful, buccholic scene! Lovely touch of personification!

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  23. lovely..delectable!! 🙂

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  24. terri0729 says:

    LOL! I have the picture too 🙂 just haven’t used it yet! Great minds think alike I guess, ha-ha! Loved the haiku, Becca! as always…

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  25. leahJlynn says:

    Sweet, love the picture and your skill of writing haikus .

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  26. Geraldine says:

    Oh so pretty. Polite birds I love it. 😉

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  27. Raivenne says:

    Oh my, I’m with Booguloo. I was thinking *these obviously are not New York birds*. 😀

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  28. booguloo says:

    It’s great the birds don’t think it’s feeding time as well. smile…

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