Skies’ Canvas





Cerulean
Skies’ canvas
Billowy white cotton
Clouds forming delightful silhouettes
Mesmerizing


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This is my 2nd attempt at writing an Elfje.

The Elfje form originated in The Netherlands.  It is a form used to teach young children to write poetry.  The word Elfje means ‘Elven’ or ‘Fairy’ poem (from ‘Elf’ meaning ‘elven’ or ’fairy’ and the suffix ‘- je’ meaning ‘little’ ). 

The form consists of 11 words spread over 5 lines. 

For more information on the form or how to write an Elfje, please visit:  http://simplyelfje.wordpress.com

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Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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12 Responses to Skies’ Canvas

  1. siggiofmaine says:

    Becca,
    You may have noticed I’m back in time…8/23/2011 was the first time I saved a haiku of yours, and I remembered that you were the first person to write and post an elfje that I was aware of…and I found them so difficult to figure out how to write…
    For the journal you sent me, I have been working on creating a keepsake for myself, and someday maybe my daughter will want it …. I remember her looking for my father’s writings and we couldn’t find them. I have only one he shared with me.
    I thought it would be nice…at least for me, to start with a couple of your poems….and then continue with some of mine that I feel are meaningful, or told by someone that they were well written ( I think I have 3 of those) and favorites from you and others that I come across, to keep all in one place.

    The journal is never far from my sight, and I think of your kindness sending it always.

    Peace and love,
    Siggi

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  2. Beautiful poem. I love clouds.
    Hugs.

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  3. granbee says:

    Wonderfully energetic cloud poem in the Elfen form!

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  4. Libby says:

    Oh Becca – this is great. I have noted this down to use too if that is OK by you. Your first will appear on Simply Elfje on Friday 11th May.

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  5. Renee Espriu says:

    Love clouds and how they paint a picture. Awesome!

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  6. Pat Cegan says:

    Interesting form, lovely poem. Thanks, BB. hugs, pat

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  7. shoreacres says:

    I used “cerulean” in a poem once – I’ve never seen anyone else use it, but it’s the most beautiful ever to describe the skies!

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  8. beaufiful and really mesmerizing!
    Becca, please stop by my blog, for I have a small surprise for you:
    http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/2012/05/accepting-the-award/

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  9. leahJlynn says:

    Yes, the clouds can become mesmerizing if you look at them to long. well done.

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  10. booguloo says:

    Thanks for teaching me something!

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  11. A Walk In My Heart says:

    Very nicely crafted Becca. Love it!

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