Acorn Falling Rain


Acorn falling rain
Rustling leaves’ dance recital
Live oaks taking bow


Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012


Week 72
(September 5 -12, 2012)

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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24 Responses to Acorn Falling Rain

  1. poetryroad says:

    As always I seek out your contribution to the Rally and I am never disappointed. My puppy thinks these falling delights are there just for her!


  2. Average Poet says:

    I like it, it brims with the beauty of nature.


  3. mbwilliams says:

    Lovely haiku as always becca!


  4. Aya Wilson says:

    the topic and image are very unique and beautiful imagery.


  5. While I missed the actual performance, I can see it vicariously—and delight in it—through your words!

    Desert Fence and Sky


  6. lessandragr says:

    That is really nice! As I read it I became excited with expectation of Fall!


  7. 4joy says:

    I often walk my dog in an old cemetery full of oaks….if it’s not the wind knocking the acorns down on our heads, it’s the squirrels! I love the dancing and rustling and bowing – super


  8. smart haiku…

    Thanks for being part of Thursday Poets Rally and hope to see you continued support …your input is valued…
    We are giving you the perfect poet award for week 71 today, enjoy!
    If you take it, please nominate another poet in your poem post, and leave your acceptance link under our award post, thank you in advance!
    Happy End of August! Have A Grand September Ahead!
    Looking forward to seeing you in the rally next time again!


  9. basho2012 says:

    wonderfully crafted haiku … i love the image too. I can tell you more about writing haiku. Ask me and I will tell you more about haiku.


  10. shakira says:

    I love to write Haiku but I can NEVER write like you, you are such a prolific writer, Becca. Kudos!
    Mine is here
    Have you an AWESOME WEEK!


  11. artmusedog says:

    Love the line ~ …live oaks taking bow ~ lovely haiku and blog ~ (A Creative Harbor) on Blogger ^_^


  12. Misky says:

    Great visuals, Becca. Love this one. 🙂


  13. Excellent description.


  14. I love the photo and your vision of the rain and acorns dancing out of joy. The joy of being alive.


  15. Kathy says:

    I love the acorn falling rain and the image of a dance recital. I’ve been outside on such afternoons and enjoy how this poem recreates the imagery.


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