Flavors
dance on
my tongues’ promenade
sweet, salty, sour, bitter
intermingling
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This is written in the form of Elfje … an Elfje is a Dutch form consisting of 11 words spread over 5 lines!
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Image Credit
© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012
All these flavors are required for true fulfillment. Your haiku does such a fine job of expressing this truth.
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lovely, the colours, the texture, the words – what a beautiful combination.
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Seems delicious 🙂
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