Autumn






Birds chase the wind’s tail
Leaves rustle and tussle near
Winter comes quickly

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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012


September Heights
Day 5

Prompt:
Autumn
(#164 )

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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14 Responses to Autumn

  1. siggiofmaine says:

    Good grief this is goooood ! Thanks for sharing.
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  2. ladynimue says:

    sign of change .. lovely 🙂

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  3. Your opening line is a wondrous image. Good picture painting!

    My Lady Autumn

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  4. tigerbrite says:

    Yes, the migration of brids is happening now. The bee eaters are gathering and tweeting, flying ever higher over the mountains until they leave us until next summer.

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  5. Grace says:

    I hope winter doesn’t come too quickly ~ Fall isn’t quite here yet ~

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  6. Bruce Ruston says:

    Leaves rustle finding that peaceful today, with the sun shining a cool day

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  7. Geraldine says:

    It does indeed but in the meantime, so wonderful to welcome Fall. 🙂

    Lovely words…

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  8. granbee says:

    After an Alabama summer, the first rustlings and crispings of autumn are MORE than welcome! And winter never comes very early here, thank goodness!

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  9. Ellecee says:

    I like this. Becca. I like the image of birds chasing the wind’s tail. Very nice.

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  10. Leo says:

    Hopefully, not very quickly 🙂

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  11. basho2012 says:

    Great imagery … on our way to winter.

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  12. Patti says:

    Nice one, Becca. I like the action in it.

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  13. Green Speck says:

    Welcoming winter 🙂

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