Milky Way’s Breadth

Starlight in your eyes
Glimmer of Milky Way’s breadth
Universe’s magnet

Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012

September Heights
Day 6

Milky Way
(#165 )


About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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13 Responses to Milky Way’s Breadth

  1. poetrydiary says:

    I think the contrast between the breadth of the Milky Way and the size of an eye works well – an eye is small physically but it is limitless when attached to an imaginative brain!


  2. ashsharma says:

    Wonderful haiku. I liked the term universe magnet. 🙂


  3. Kathy says:

    Dreamy, romantic. I like it.


  4. granbee says:

    You have beautifully reminded me here that our galaxy really is a magnet for the means of sustaining life all around, and in, the earth.


  5. Teresa says:

    What a wonderful idea! I love the universe within the eye.


  6. Leo says:

    Lovely image and imagery 🙂 Thank you Becca.


  7. Awesome Becca … great take on Milky Way and that picture …. is stunning.


  8. Patti says:

    Wonderful metaphor. The picture is perfect with your words.


  9. Lovely imagery in this haiku.


  10. odyzz says:

    Ah! such lovely imagination.. beautiful….

    thanks a lot BG for your insight to my problem regarding “comments disappearing ” ..hope i don’t come across anytime in future….you took so much of pain to explain..thanks once again…


  11. Grace says:

    I like the starlight in your eyes ~


  12. Jolly says:

    Loved the starlight in eyes imagery.


  13. Green Speck says:

    Universe in the eyes … wow 🙂


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