A night full of bliss
Gardenia and tears mingle
Her love walks away
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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012
September Heights
Day 14
Prompt:
Revelation
(#173 )
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"On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea" 
Oh, full of emotions – gardenia and tears mingle!
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A revelation indeed—one that many of us have experienced (and once is enough, I might add).
Revelation
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very evocative, engaging all the senses.
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I like the pacing of change through this from joy to sadness, without a sudden switch, like the middle line.
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Especially love the second line, so expressive.
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since gardenia is one of my favorite scents (altho a bit too cloying to wear often), I read these lovely words in a miasma of sadness
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Lovely, but sad. The first thought that came to me was, “ah, it’s the old one-night stand.”
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Lovely but sad parting ~
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Beautifully sad.
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Lovely word picture, but there is hope.
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Sad yet hopes intact…captivating!!
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This is beautiful and sad, Becca. Although the tears could be joyful and he could be returning, it doesn’t feel like that. Nicely done.
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very nice haiku 🙂
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Amazing words !!!
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