Crestfallen




Cycle
Yellow crumpled
Leaves raining down
Autumn prepares for winter
Crestfallen




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This is written in the form of Elfje … an Elfje is a Dutch form consisting of 11 words spread over 5 lines!
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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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8 Responses to Crestfallen

  1. Renee Espriu says:

    Beautifully written Haiku, Becca, and image to go with.

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  2. ladynimue says:

    I would not call such a beauty crest fallen. It makes the grounds so damn awesome looking too !

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  3. dani says:

    a new-to-me form! LOVE that you describe autumn as crestfallen!

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  4. What a beautiful expression of the season and I love the form. So concise…perfect!

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  5. Interesting form, lovely imagery.

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  6. siggiofmaine says:

    I like this very much…and I like the Dutch form also. Thanks for sharing.

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