World overflowing
Void, Loneliness, Sorrow
Invisible plea


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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012

Pain (#199)


About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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14 Responses to Pain

  1. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    I believe the plea is heard…

    Lady of Sorrows


  2. very well expressed in few words!


  3. Poignant and powerful, Becca


  4. Eclipse says:

    Really moving….


  5. Grace says:

    Lovely haiku on pain ~


  6. Prema says:

    Yes, sometimes things can get so overwhelming that the experience of it, is just what you have expressed.


  7. Becca,

    I’m affiliated with a new National Pain organization that is not up on the web yet. (I’m NOT paid)
    With permission I would like to send them your Pain Haiku as they are interested in using creative expressions in promos and/or the site itself. However, I need written permission.
    If you give permission send me an e-mail at with a cut-n-paste of the haiku you are giving permission for and whether you want your name attached or want to remain anonymous.
    muchly love,


  8. elleceef says:

    Very powerful image, Becca, both the photo and your haiku. It’s sad that there are many who feel invisible and have that plea to be seen and heard.


  9. Green Speck says:

    Invisible plea — amazingly said !!!


  10. siggiofmaine says:

    Said eloquently. Thank you.


  11. Crystal says:

    It is an invisible plea, you captured that so well and so beautifully.. and the image, so true to those three simple and yet poignant lines..


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