Cursed Prison

Posted on February 3, 2013 by becca givens





Cursed prison of pride
Patience stores liberty
Inner peace seeks truth



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Pride
(#207)

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About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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10 Responses to Cursed Prison

  1. Magical Mystical Teacher says:
    February 8, 2013 at 4:51 pm

    I hope patience not only stores liberty, but furnishes it as well!

    No Pride of Lions

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  2. toadslayer says:
    February 6, 2013 at 7:45 am

    Pride can be both good and bad. I like your take on the prompt.

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  3. ElizOF says:
    February 6, 2013 at 6:29 am

    Indeed quite true… This is a terrific haiku. 😉
    Eliz

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  4. Write Girl says:
    February 4, 2013 at 9:16 pm

    Pride can be a prison. Pearls of wisdom in every verse. Nicely written.

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  5. elleceef says:
    February 4, 2013 at 9:00 am

    “patience stores liberty”,, I think you are so right,,,enjoyed your haiku today,,,

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  6. readinpleasure says:
    February 4, 2013 at 8:38 am

    Beautifully full of wisdom. 🙂

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  7. Anthony North says:
    February 4, 2013 at 2:35 am

    Great depth to this. Loved it.

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  8. Green Speck says:
    February 3, 2013 at 11:12 pm

    Inner peace seeks truth … you said it perfectly !!!

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  9. Renee Espriu says:
    February 3, 2013 at 9:18 pm

    Your little bits of wisdom in your Haikus and your photos bring beauty to our world. I want to pass on to you the Beautiful Bloggers Award. http://reneejustturtleflight.com/2013/02/04/

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