First Spring Gust


Shingles wave
Wind chimes clang with gusts
Birds take cover


© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013

LOGO - Carpe Diem logo March 2013

Haru Ichiban
(First Spring Gust)

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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13 Responses to First Spring Gust

  1. shoreacres says:

    I’m behind in reading, but my goodness – I do remember that wind from last week. I lost two days of work because I couldn’t get on the boats. Either the water had been blown out of the bay, or the boat was so far down I couldn’t get on. (Well, maybe I could have gotten on, but I never would have gotten back off!)


  2. March seems to be the month when spring and winter dance the “pas a deux”, moving this way and that, back and forth.


  3. Wow Becca what a delightful haiku you have shared here. I love the deeper meaning in it. Thank you.


  4. I like the feeling of a pleasant breeze but by the end of the haiku, you know it’s something more threatening


  5. Libby says:

    So descriptive.


  6. Green Speck says:

    I hope the birds are fine !!!


  7. WabiSabi says:

    Oh my! The waving shingles gave my heart a lift!!


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