Cool

Posted on June 10, 2013 by becca givens


Cool water
Fluid motion
Pirouette

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Fine droplets
Sprinkler’s veil
Two cardinals dance

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Logo - Carpe Diem - June 2013


Prompt:
#218
Suzushi – (cool, coolness)

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Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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9 Responses to Cool

  1. JazzBumpa says:
    June 11, 2013 at 1:25 pm

    cool images

    a man floating
    in the water pirouette
    his name is eddy

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says:
    June 11, 2013 at 12:58 pm

    I love the dancing cardinals

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  3. moondustwriter says:
    June 11, 2013 at 9:32 am

    a lovely cool water dance
    I love watching the birds splash about on the hottest of dayz

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  4. Peter Kaimenyi says:
    June 11, 2013 at 6:39 am

    cool

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  5. emma at llm calling says:
    June 11, 2013 at 3:00 am

    I adore this, it really brings to mind the movement of water, wonderffful

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  6. jrbsays says:
    June 11, 2013 at 1:07 am

    I can hear the sound of the sprinkler…and children’s laughter too methinks 🙂
    the weary swagman

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  7. howanxious says:
    June 10, 2013 at 11:33 pm

    Nice imagery.. 🙂

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