Cold Raindrops Fall

Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge #16:    write a Tan Renga.

Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7).  Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two.  Poet One writes the  5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.

green leaves turn orange
amid the colors we see              
cold raindrops falling             (JzB)

[ … ] your stanza ??????   (7 – 7)

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green leaves turn orange
amid the colors we see
cold raindrops falling
seasonal winds shift through leaves
signaling start of the dance

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Other entries for Tan Renga Challenge

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013

(by Haiku writer – JazzBumpa)

Prompt #16: Cold Raindrops Falling

green leaves turn orange
amid the colors we see
cold raindrops falling
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[ … ] your stanza ??????