Palette of Colours

Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge #17:    write a Tan Renga.

Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7).  Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two.  Poet One writes the  5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.

palette of colours
chrysanthemums bestowing
fragrance everywhere           
  – by Atreyee

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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palette of colours
chrysanthemums bestowing
fragrance everywhere
elixir of immersed blooms
satiated near koi pond

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Prompt # 17:    by Atreyee
Palette of Colors

palette of colours
chrysanthemums bestowing
fragrance everywhere

[ … ] your stanza ??????

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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9 Responses to Palette of Colours

  1. Sun says:

    i like the koi combined with this – a lovely image.

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  2. Wonderful … very meditative

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  3. I love the second stanza on Koi a lot Becca, it makes this Tan Renga a pearl.

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  4. perfect moment captured here….

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  5. Laurie Kolp says:

    Gorgeous, Becca!

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  6. I love your verse. Becca this was just wonderful. Hugs, Barbara

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