Fair-Skinned Lass


Carpe Diem Special titled “Sweat Lodge” …  “The goal of this special is to write a new haiku in the same sense, tone and Spirit as the one given of the featured haiku-poet. Garry writes his haiku in the non-classical style, so you don’t have to use the classical syllables-structure 5-7-5, but if you like … of course you may use the classic count.”

Garry Gay’s Inspiration:

sweat lodge –
my only vision
is of the cool water


Sunny Beach Stone

Fair-skinned lass – scorched on sunny beach
Dreaming of cool ridge

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013

Shared on:   dVerseOpenLinkNight – Week 117

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Carpe Diem Special #61

Gary Gay’s Sweat Lodge
sweat lodge –
my only vision
is of the cool water


About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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11 Responses to Fair-Skinned Lass

  1. brian miller says:

    ha. nice….this one has a bit of heat to it becca…smiles
    in the fall here so cooler days
    i could use some heat…ha


  2. sizzle
    I love it and have felt it too often
    nicely done Becca


  3. 4joyjoanne says:

    I am a ‘fair lass’ and my older sister (who wasn’t) was my ‘tan co-ordinator’…hahaha, I’d always get a burn….


  4. very very nicely done!


  5. Nice respons on the haiku by Garry … it’s a beauty and it’s a very true beauty … sun shield is so important.


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