“Autumn Leaves”

Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge #20:    write a Tan Renga.

Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7).  Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two.  Poet One writes the  5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.

autumn leaves
myriad shades red and gold
begin to fall as snow                   (by Joanne)

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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autumn leaves
myriad shades red and gold
begin to fall as snow
plush coat of many colors
cushions prowl of stealthy cat

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LOGO - TAN RENGA CHALLENGE new
(by Haiku writer – Joanne)

Prompt # 20:
autumn leaves
myriad shades red and gold
begin to fall as snow

[ … ] your stanza ??????

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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11 Responses to “Autumn Leaves”

  1. Sun says:

    love the imagery – wonder what the catch will turn up to be. ☺

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  2. atrm61 says:

    Aww,that’s so lovely-I can see the cats prowling in those fallen coloured leaves!

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  3. Wonderful completed Becca, good to see you again here. I like the imagery you have painted with that second stanza.

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  4. Cats prowling through the leaves.. great thought

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  5. Maggie Grace says:

    Cats rule in poetry…wonderful completion!

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  6. love this completion…perfect fit…

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  7. Kitties Blue says:

    Really like it. Great images. Janet

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  8. siggiofmaine says:

    Wow…great completion ! Love it.
    Peace
    Siggi

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