“Touched”

Carpe Diem Special titled “Touched”  …  “The goal of this special is to write a new haiku in the same sense, tone and Spirit as the one given of the featured haiku-poet.  Garry Gay, president of the American Haiku Society, writes his haiku in the non-classical style, so you don’t have to use the classical syllables-structure 5-7-5, but if you like … of course you may use the classic count.”

Garry Gay’s Inspiration:

touched
in the darkness–
by a snowflake

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Scarves of mist
Probed by gentle rain
Wrap my senses

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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013

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Carpe Diem Special #64

Gary Gay’s “Touched”
touched
in the darkness–
by a snowflake

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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11 Responses to “Touched”

  1. atrm61 says:

    This is beautifully worded!

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  2. Wonderful. feels very much like autumn..

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  3. Becca,
    your haiku gives that ticklish delight

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  4. exceptional … Gay would love this … as do I

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  5. jrbsays says:

    I love ‘scarves of mist’

    in the darkness

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  6. Awesome reaction on the haiku by Garry Gay, Becca.

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