Tan Renga Challenge Month (TRM)
at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.
Sara McNulty presents Life Completes Circle:
life completes circle
at the end of the journey
death draws the last line
[ … ] your stanza ??????
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life completes circle
at the end of the journey
death draws the last line
heaven rejoices new saint
Divine love washes her whole
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A Tan Renga is a short chained poem and is written by two poets. It looks very similar with the Tanka, the only difference is that Tan Renga is written by two poets and the Tanka by one poet. In this Tan Renga Challenge the goal is to write the second stanza (7-7) of the Tan Renga by associating on the image or the words painted in the haiku.
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My previous entries for Tan Renga Challenge
© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013
Tan Renga Month #5:
life completes circle
at the end of the journey
death draws the last line
[ … ] your stanza ??????
A new saint welcomed… I love that. Unique indeed!
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A beautiful completion of the circle Becca. Your words say what I saw in the circle
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how hopeful and nice
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hopeful and meaningful completion. thank you. ♥
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beautiful conclusion….:)
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It’s amazing what divine love can do. Thanks for this lovely completion!
Final Act of Defiance
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Very nice Becca … all of the entries have somewhat a spiritual completion, your’s is unique in it’s sphere.
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