By the Shore – TRM

Tan Renga Challenge Month (TRM)
at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.

JRB presents Shell:

by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells
dejected treasure squandered
lighthouse beacon spots his tears

 

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A Tan Renga is a short chained poem and is written by two poets. It looks very similar with the Tanka, the only difference is that Tan Renga is written by two poets and the Tanka by one poet. In this Tan Renga Challenge the goal is to write the second stanza (7-7) of the Tan Renga by associating on the image or the words painted in the haiku.
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My previous entries for Tan Renga Challenge

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013


LOGO - Carpe Diem Tan Renga Month Nov 2013
(by JRB)

Tan Renga Month #9:
by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells

[ … ] your stanza ??????

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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8 Responses to By the Shore – TRM

  1. Wow! What a beautiful completion Becca. Your stanza makes the sadness of the first stronger … well done.

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  2. Sun says:

    enjoyed your completion ☺

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  3. A wonderful completion Becca.. thanks for following me on twitter also 🙂

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  4. Interesting Becca. I know how very busy you have been. I have thought about you and do hope life has settled down somewhat. Too, I hope that you are well. Thanks for coming by. (((hugs))) Liz

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  5. jrbsays says:

    It’s so wonderful seeing where people take words you have written. Thank you for this lovely journey.

    by the shore

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