Fog over Empty Pond – TRM

Tan Renga Challenge Month (TRM)
at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.

Ese presents *Kari (Goose)*:

fog over empty pond
in wingspans of migratory geese
farewell to summer

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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fog over empty pond
in wingspans of migratory geese
farewell to summer
openness of autumn arrives
colorful eddies dance near

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A Tan Renga is a short chained poem and is written by two poets. It looks very similar with the Tanka, the only difference is that Tan Renga is written by two poets and the Tanka by one poet. In this Tan Renga Challenge the goal is to write the second stanza (7-7) of the Tan Renga by associating on the image or the words painted in the haiku.
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My previous entries for Tan Renga Challenge

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013

(by Ese)

Tan Renga Month #11:
fog over empty pond
in wingspans of migratory geese
farewell to summer

[ … ] your stanza ??????